Point of View
Giving Feedback on Point of View
Huh, good question, Lucy.
Honestly, when I click on the POV feedback criteria, I'm looking for whether the reviewer thinks the POV character is right for the scene, as well as if they found the character well written, interesting, right for the story, etc.
It'd be cool if we could leave little 'notes' under the feedback criteria we select, instead of cramming our wants into Author's Notes--which I find not a lot of people read over, anyway.
Like, say the reviewer clicks on Plot to write their thoughts, and a tiny message pops up from the author: I'm seeking opinions on whether the plot sucks you in--does it peak your interest? Specifically, did the first chapters draw you in? Or do you feel they're lacking?
Or something like that. You know, a way for the author and the reviewer to communicate better. That way, the author would get the answers they're worrying over, and the reviewer can have an idea of where the author's at.
Just a suggestion.