@ Andree

You are a good teller of classic stories, the kind I grew up reading, with the twist at the end. I looked at The Meek and just kept reading to the end. So I posted a review of From Reality's Edge. You create interesting characters, believably describe their situations, and the dialogue rings true. You didn't ask about pace and please don't take this wrong when I suggest that more show & less tell would speed up the pace of the story. I found myself wanting to know more than mere telling can tell. If that makes any sense? Even so, your stories are enjoyable. Thanks for sharing some.

Hy'as Amber, Welcome!

Feel free to jump into the dialogue pool. Two threads you might check are "The Three-Sentence Horror Story" -we're having fun there- and, if you care to share any hard earned advice with new writers, "ADVICE TO NEW WRITERS."