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 | As the story we were working on in another thread has taken a life of its own for a little, for those interested, I am continuing with my original prompt here. It is a round robin story, 1000 words or less, try to keep the flow, no sudden massive shifts in story, intro new characters WITH the old (and it's really not nice to remove the last chapter with "it was all a dream", k? k. )     If you are interested in writing, let us know here, and we'll add you to the list.  For my first writer, I pick... MIMI! (you need the break from vampire nuns. )   >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>  It was a dark and stormy night.  Johan looked out at the street, what little he could see through the slit  in the blinds, held open with one finger.  Rain washed down the outside of the glass, f the world outside twisting and churning under flickering street lights.
 The shrill sound of the microwave broke Johan from his reverie, and letting the slats close, he turned to collect his lonely, one man meal.  Walking towards the kitchen, his eyes fell on a picture standing on a shelf, surrounded by smaller knick knacks.  He smiled wistfully, then frowned and walked past.
 
 
 Minutes later he sat at a small table in the corner off his kitchen. The TV dinner was still hot, and he waited, listening to the rain, thinking to himself.  A long sigh dragged from him, and he turned to face the picture on the far wall again.
 
 “Another night alone. The kind of night you loved, before...”
 
 Johan trailed off, realizing that he held his phone in his hands, finger over a speedial button.
 
 “No, not... No, I’m not calling!”
 
 He slid the phone across the table away from him. “Not calling first.”  His pronouncement to the world at large hung in the air as he stubbornly began chewing down overcooked chicken and corn.
 
 Thunder cracked and the lights grew dim for a moment.  It blasted again, blue white bolts shining through the window, and the crack of thunder came almost instantly behind it.  The lights fell away completely, the sound of the heater fan, the fridge compressor, all was dark and silent except for the howling wind and streaming rain.
 
 Johan reached over and snagged his phone just as the screen started to darken. That small source of illumination gave him confidence, and he walked back to the window. A quick glance confirmed it was a larger area than just his house.  The darkness outside broke in an instant as the sky lit in a fire of red and purple.  He pulled the blinds away from the window, staring at the sky open mouthed.  As if on it’s own volition, fingers pressed on the speed dial they’d hovered over, and Johan raised his phone to his face.
 
 A few rings, and then that voice, so familiar and dear, answered.
 
 
 “Yeah, it’s me.  You looking outside?  Yeah, that’s what it looks like to me too.”
 
 He hung up the line, staring up as the giant metal shell hanging in the sky split open, and thousands of small dots flew away from it, getting larger by the moment.
 It
 was a dark and stormy night.  Johan looked out at the street, what 
little he could see through the slit  in the blinds, held open with one 
finger.  Rain washed down the outside of the glass, f the world outside 
twisting and churning under flickering street lights.  The
 shrill sound of the microwave broke Johan from his reverie, and letting
 the slats close, he turned to collect his lonely, one man meal. 
 Walking towards the kitchen, his eyes fell on a picture standing on a 
shelf, surrounded by smaller knick knacks.  He smiled wistfully, then 
frowned and walked past.  Minutes
 later he sat at a small table in the corner off his kitchen. The TV 
dinner was still hot, and he waited, listening to the rain, thinking to 
himself.  A long sigh dragged from him, and he turned to face the 
picture on the far wall again.  “Another night alone. The kind of night you loved, before...” Johan trailed off, realizing that he held his phone in his hands, finger over a speedial button.  “No, not... No, I’m not calling!”   He
 slid the phone across the table away from him. “Not calling first.” 
 His pronouncement to the world at large hung in the air as he 
stubbornly began chewing down overcooked chicken and corn.  Thunder
 cracked and the lights grew dim for a moment.  It blasted again, blue 
white bolts shining through the window, and the crack of thunder came 
almost instantly behind it.  The lights fell away completely, the sound 
of the heater fan, the fridge compressor, all was dark and silent except
 for the howling wind and streaming rain.   Johan
 reached over and snagged his phone just as the screen started to 
darken. That small source of illumination gave him confidence, and he 
walked back to the window. A quick glance confirmed it was a larger area
 than just his house.  The darkness outside broke in an instant as the 
sky lit in a fire of red and purple.  He pulled the blinds away from the
 window, staring at the sky open mouthed.  As if on it’s own volition, 
fingers pressed on the speed dial they’d hovered over, and Johan raised 
his phone to his face.    A few rings, and then that voice, so familiar and dear, answered. “Yeah, it’s me.  You looking outside?  Yeah, that’s what it looks like to me too.” He
 hung up the line, staring up as the giant metal shell hanging in the 
sky split open, and thousands of small dots flew away from it, getting 
larger by the moment.  
 
 - See more at: 
http://www.bookcountry.com/Community/Discussion/Default.aspx?g=posts&t=8589935425&page=2#sthash.HCaJEE8V.dpufIt
 was a dark and stormy night.  Johan looked out at the street, what 
little he could see through the slit  in the blinds, held open with one 
finger.  Rain washed down the outside of the glass, f the world outside 
twisting and churning under flickering street lights.  The
 shrill sound of the microwave broke Johan from his reverie, and letting
 the slats close, he turned to collect his lonely, one man meal. 
 Walking towards the kitchen, his eyes fell on a picture standing on a 
shelf, surrounded by smaller knick knacks.  He smiled wistfully, then 
frowned and walked past.  Minutes
 later he sat at a small table in the corner off his kitchen. The TV 
dinner was still hot, and he waited, listening to the rain, thinking to 
himself.  A long sigh dragged from him, and he turned to face the 
picture on the far wall again.  “Another night alone. The kind of night you loved, before...” Johan trailed off, realizing that he held his phone in his hands, finger over a speedial button.  “No, not... No, I’m not calling!”   He
 slid the phone across the table away from him. “Not calling first.” 
 His pronouncement to the world at large hung in the air as he 
stubbornly began chewing down overcooked chicken and corn.  Thunder
 cracked and the lights grew dim for a moment.  It blasted again, blue 
white bolts shining through the window, and the crack of thunder came 
almost instantly behind it.  The lights fell away completely, the sound 
of the heater fan, the fridge compressor, all was dark and silent except
 for the howling wind and streaming rain.   Johan
 reached over and snagged his phone just as the screen started to 
darken. That small source of illumination gave him confidence, and he 
walked back to the window. A quick glance confirmed it was a larger area
 than just his house.  The darkness outside broke in an instant as the 
sky lit in a fire of red and purple.  He pulled the blinds away from the
 window, staring at the sky open mouthed.  As if on it’s own volition, 
fingers pressed on the speed dial they’d hovered over, and Johan raised 
his phone to his face.    A few rings, and then that voice, so familiar and dear, answered. “Yeah, it’s me.  You looking outside?  Yeah, that’s what it looks like to me too.” He
 hung up the line, staring up as the giant metal shell hanging in the 
sky split open, and thousands of small dots flew away from it, getting 
larger by the moment.  
 
 - See more at: 
http://www.bookcountry.com/Community/Discussion/Default.aspx?g=posts&t=8589935425&page=2#sthash.HCaJEE8V.dpuf  It
 was a dark and stormy night.  Johan looked out at the street, what 
little he could see through the slit  in the blinds, held open with one 
finger.  Rain washed down the outside of the glass, f the world outside 
twisting and churning under flickering street lights.  The
 shrill sound of the microwave broke Johan from his reverie, and letting
 the slats close, he turned to collect his lonely, one man meal. 
 Walking towards the kitchen, his eyes fell on a picture standing on a 
shelf, surrounded by smaller knick knacks.  He smiled wistfully, then 
frowned and walked past.  Minutes
 later he sat at a small table in the corner off his kitchen. The TV 
dinner was still hot, and he waited, listening to the rain, thinking to 
himself.  A long sigh dragged from him, and he turned to face the 
picture on the far wall again.  “Another night alone. The kind of night you loved, before...” Johan trailed off, realizing that he held his phone in his hands, finger over a speedial button.  “No, not... No, I’m not calling!”   He
 slid the phone across the table away from him. “Not calling first.” 
 His pronouncement to the world at large hung in the air as he 
stubbornly began chewing down overcooked chicken and corn.  Thunder
 cracked and the lights grew dim for a moment.  It blasted again, blue 
white bolts shining through the window, and the crack of thunder came 
almost instantly behind it.  The lights fell away completely, the sound 
of the heater fan, the fridge compressor, all was dark and silent except
 for the howling wind and streaming rain.   Johan
 reached over and snagged his phone just as the screen started to 
darken. That small source of illumination gave him confidence, and he 
walked back to the window. A quick glance confirmed it was a larger area
 than just his house.  The darkness outside broke in an instant as the 
sky lit in a fire of red and purple.  He pulled the blinds away from the
 window, staring at the sky open mouthed.  As if on it’s own volition, 
fingers pressed on the speed dial they’d hovered over, and Johan raised 
his phone to his face.    A few rings, and then that voice, so familiar and dear, answered. “Yeah, it’s me.  You looking outside?  Yeah, that’s what it looks like to me too.” He
 hung up the line, staring up as the giant metal shell hanging in the 
sky split open, and thousands of small dots flew away from it, getting 
larger by the moment.  
 
 - See more at: 
http://www.bookcountry.com/Community/Discussion/Default.aspx?g=posts&t=8589935425&page=2#sthash.HCaJEE8V.dpufIt
 was a dark and stormy night.  Johan looked out at the street, what 
little he could see through the slit  in the blinds, held open with one 
finger.  Rain washed down the outside of the glass, f the world outside 
twisting and churning under flickering street lights.  The
 shrill sound of the microwave broke Johan from his reverie, and letting
 the slats close, he turned to collect his lonely, one man meal. 
 Walking towards the kitchen, his eyes fell on a picture standing on a 
shelf, surrounded by smaller knick knacks.  He smiled wistfully, then 
frowned and walked past.  Minutes
 later he sat at a small table in the corner off his kitchen. The TV 
dinner was still hot, and he waited, listening to the rain, thinking to 
himself.  A long sigh dragged from him, and he turned to face the 
picture on the far wall again.  “Another night alone. The kind of night you loved, before...” Johan trailed off, realizing that he held his phone in his hands, finger over a speedial button.  “No, not... No, I’m not calling!”   He
 slid the phone across the table away from him. “Not calling first.” 
 His pronouncement to the world at large hung in the air as he 
stubbornly began chewing down overcooked chicken and corn.  Thunder
 cracked and the lights grew dim for a moment.  It blasted again, blue 
white bolts shining through the window, and the crack of thunder came 
almost instantly behind it.  The lights fell away completely, the sound 
of the heater fan, the fridge compressor, all was dark and silent except
 for the howling wind and streaming rain.   Johan
 reached over and snagged his phone just as the screen started to 
darken. That small source of illumination gave him confidence, and he 
walked back to the window. A quick glance confirmed it was a larger area
 than just his house.  The darkness outside broke in an instant as the 
sky lit in a fire of red and purple.  He pulled the blinds away from the
 window, staring at the sky open mouthed.  As if on it’s own volition, 
fingers pressed on the speed dial they’d hovered over, and Johan raised 
his phone to his face.    A few rings, and then that voice, so familiar and dear, answered. “Yeah, it’s me.  You looking outside?  Yeah, that’s what it looks like to me too.” He
 hung up the line, staring up as the giant metal shell hanging in the 
sky split open, and thousands of small dots flew away from it, getting 
larger by the moment.  
 
 - See more at: 
http://www.bookcountry.com/Community/Discussion/Default.aspx?g=posts&t=8589935425&page=2#sthash.HCaJEE8V.dpuf
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