The Raveled Sleeve of Care

By Kevin Haggerty

Draft 10 Posted Date: 4/22/2013

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About the Book:

What if the end of the world had come and gone already and nobody noticed?

About the Author:

When Kevin Haggerty was 6 he promised himself never to eat at McDonalds, own a car, or get married. Or perhaps it was a prophecy. We can't be sure yet.

Author's Note:

Thanks everyone for your continued interest. I've added a new chapter (five) and added some intriguing new material to the second half of chapter 4 (68%) that sets up a nice bit o' business in the new chapter. Thank you all for your help. I find the longer I sit with the book, the more of your critiques I incorporate into the MS (Tom, the chicken pox are gone!). So, thanks again. Did I say "thanks?" 6.2.12: Fixed a couple important continuity issues brought about by the latest chapter and did some general cleaning up and improving the tension in the latest chapter.

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