By JamieWyman

Draft 1 Posted Date: 3/23/2011

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Psychological Thriller

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About the Book:

A southern town is turned upside down when they find a monster in their midst.

About the Author:

All writings are fueled by chai and a Ouija board. Okay, maybe not the Ouija board. Repped by Jennie Goloboy at Red Sofa Literary.

Author's Note:

This is a piece of flash fic I did for a challenge using the following prompts: lemons, chains, bull fight, hostile and woebegone. The rules are that one must be used as the title and the others are prompts for your story. I know flash can be a difficult creature to review since it's so short, but I am working on my short fiction at the moment and any feedback is greatly appreciated.

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