Step Right Up

By JamieWyman

Draft 1 Posted Date: 3/16/2011

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Weird Fiction

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About the Book:

When her boyfriend insists she take a walk with him through the freak show tent, Ellie would rather just have her cotton candy. The deeper into the tent Ellie walks, the closer she comes to facing her deepest fears.

About the Author:

All writings are fueled by chai and a Ouija board. Okay, maybe not the Ouija board. Repped by Jennie Goloboy at Red Sofa Literary.

Author's Note:

This is my first attempt at flash fiction based on the prompt "irregular creatures". I feel my short fiction is weak and have been trying to improve. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

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