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Final Muster
By
RC Gravelle
Draft 8 Posted Date: 12/18/2015
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Genre:
Historical fiction
Word Count:
3,603
About the Book:
The first drafts had POV problems. I THINK I now have only 2 POV's. I already know some opinions hold that two is one too many for a story. I am happy with these two. I want these two. HOWEVER, if you think I still have more than two POV's, or if my transitions between them need more physical space or action, then I want to know that. And that is really the only criterion I want you to evaluate. Thank you.
About the Author:
I wish I could be an author.
Author's Note:
A PTSD story
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Draft 8 12/18/2015 (2) Reviews
Draft 5 11/14/2015 (1) Reviews
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