Final Muster

By RC Gravelle

Draft 8 Posted Date: 12/18/2015

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 2 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 6 Reviews

Genre:

Historical fiction

Word Count:

3,603

About the Book:

The first drafts had POV problems. I THINK I now have only 2 POV's. I already know some opinions hold that two is one too many for a story. I am happy with these two. I want these two. HOWEVER, if you think I still have more than two POV's, or if my transitions between them need more physical space or action, then I want to know that. And that is really the only criterion I want you to evaluate. Thank you.

About the Author:

I wish I could be an author.

Author's Note:

A PTSD story

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