About the Book:
In a future without hope, one girl’s mistake will change the fate of mankind.
Sky grew up in a world conquered by alien invaders, the Cardinals. She fled the savage cities where people do anything to stay alive, taking refuge deep in the forests with a nomad community, and ignoring the fight for Earth her brother left her to join. Enlisting in a loosing war is something she refuses to do, until a new ship appears and blows two enemy prowlers out of the sky. Never before have the Cardinals suffered losses. She searches out the pilot in hopes that he can change the tides, but little does she know that bringing him home will draw the Cardinal, killing everyone she knows.
Caught in a vicious assault, Sky flees with the man she suspects as a traitor. They journey across a lawless land to find her brother, because she believes that the pilot might be to key taking back the world.
About the Author:
This book is in it's first draft-- still in the process of being written. I would love some feedback on the opening chapters. All comments are welcome. I hope you enjoy it.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting, Continuity