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The Dream | Walker in the Trees Chapter 1
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Richard Leland Neal
Draft 1 Posted Date: 4/13/2015
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Genre:
Urban Fantasy
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2,911
About the Book:
Karl is haunted by spirits searching for justice. These spirits speak to him through dreams and images urging him to search for the evil that holds them to this world.
About the Author:
Richard Neal is a safety officer at a L.A. homeless shelter. He holds a BA in Psychology .
Author's Note:
This is only the first chapter of my novel ‘Walker in the Trees’. I have uploaded it alone so that I can get direct notes on the style as it varies from other parts of the novel. Some have pointed to this chapter as the high point of description and others have said that it is too wordy, but I have no consistent points to consider.
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