About the Book:
A geeky 14 year-old and his athletic twin set out in search of their long-lost little brother, but find a mysterious artifact, hidden civilizations, and a villainous mastermind who commands an army of mutated monsters.
About the Author:
I spent a couple decades as a music/technology/videogame journalist. Now I write and consult for videogames. This is my first attempt at book-length fiction.
Thank you so much for taking a look at my work-in-progress!
I welcome any feedback anyone has. I also have some specific questions, which I've listed at the end of the sample, that I would LOVE help in answering if anyone has the time and inclination to work them into their reviews. Thanks again!
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing