The Spider Queen and the Lizard King | -

By Eric A Bratcher

Draft 3 Posted Date: 3/13/2015

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About the Book:

A geeky 14 year-old and his athletic twin set out in search of their long-lost little brother, but find a mysterious artifact, hidden civilizations, and a villainous mastermind who commands an army of mutated monsters.

About the Author:

I spent a couple decades as a music/technology/videogame journalist. Now I write and consult for videogames. This is my first attempt at book-length fiction.

Author's Note:

Hi everybody! Thank you so much for taking a look at my work-in-progress! I welcome any feedback anyone has. I also have some specific questions, which I've listed at the end of the sample, that I would LOVE help in answering if anyone has the time and inclination to work them into their reviews. Thanks again!

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