The Last Carnations of 76 Blackbird

By melissa mcdaniel

Draft 2 Posted Date: 9/26/2014

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About the Book:

In the New World, all that matters are your dreams. Dreams are meant help you discover your true Purpose: your reason for being recreated after the Old World fell apart. The only problem is that Cellophane's dreams are all nightmares.

About the Author:

Melissa is a twenty-something living and working in Brooklyn. This is her first completed novel.

Author's Note:

Thanks so much for reading. This is the prologue and the first two chapters. In this draft, I'm using an older, more abstract version of the prologue which is more about the capturing "voice" of the novel and less about shoving useful information down the reader's throat. I hope you enjoy reading!

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