The Invisible People

By Alex Maher

Draft 14 Posted Date: 10/9/2014

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“So, have you ever met Daniel Clifford?” “Dan Clifford… He was that guy that won the lotto wasn’t he? 80 million or something. Lucky guy.” - Jenny Maxwell - Sydney NSW “Yeah I knew him. He used to work for me. After he won the money he went a bit strange … gave a fucking great big house to this bunch of homeless people – wait what, I cant say fu – oh sorry – Yeah I heard that he bought a house for bunch of homeless people, up north somewhere.” – Paul Mathewson, Studio manager ITS design. Sydney NSW “That’s the guy that went crazy hey … won a bucket load of money and went crazy. I heard that he killed all those people in his house. But I don’t think that's true, I mean why would you help them if all you wanted to do was hurt them?” – Tara Risling, Wauchope, Northern NSW “Yeah, I knew him… I knew him well… He was a good guy eh … it’s all mixed up bro … No more questions please eh. Leave me alone.” – Morgan Hakuai, Sydney, NSW “So, What really did happen to Dan Clifford? And what drove him to do the things he did?. Stay tuned for our full report tonight at 6pm” – Sally Maxwell, ANNN Australian National News Network

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Sadly this story is closer to the truth than im comfortable admitting ;-) well. the opening is anyway. I'll leave it at that shall I ;-) Cheers Al

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