About the Book:
Unseen, Unheard and undetected, the soulweaver feeds of the souls of the dying. Cleaning them of their lifes memories before transporting them to the awaiting unborn. But what would happen when things go wrong and the weavers stop weaving?
About the Author:
I am a Creative Graphic designer with a love of storytelling. This is my first journey into the dark world of horror, and im finding myself hanging on to its coat tails for dear life wondering where the hell this thing is taking me. Loving every minute of it.
So, I've started a complete re-write, This is the first raw brain dump as it come out and I'm trying to be as honest to the initial idea as I could. - This story started life as a particularly vivid dream, I'm in 2 minds whether its working or not - it could be argued that it's sounding a bit like a cheap porno... but bugger it, it is what it is.
I'm not happy from around Chapter 12 onwards, I'll probably re-work those bits as I find the inspiration and time, but for now that's where im up to... ruff as guts, but we shall see where tis takes us. I think i have hit "middle of the story syndrome" with it.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting