The Loop

By Timothy Maguire

Draft 1 Posted Date: 1/18/2014

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About the Book:

At first, it seemed that I had to pass the Psionic Academy's Competency Test. If I didn't (or I skipped it) I'd just be hurled back to the start of the day, waking up in the dorm again. Unfortunately, passing the test turned out to be only first challenge I wasn't allowed to fail. The next two years were littered with pitfalls that was going to take work and my burgeoning psychic abilities to defeat. Even if that meant I was going to spend years figuring out how to beat them. Unfortunately, It turns out that things weren't quite so simple.

About the Author:

I'm a slightly crazy aspiring author who has too many projects. One of them, Slide The Scales From My Eyes, is finished and is available through book country right now!

Author's Note:

This is one half of my 2013 Nano (things went well). It's an odd little idea whacking together a few interesting ideas into a girl's narrative about how she stayed sane in a world that's stopped working properly. I'm trying to reveal what's going on and why as she come sup to it, so let me know if any of it doesn't make any sense.

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