Vengeance Upturned

By Maya Starling

Draft 4 Posted Date: 12/7/2013

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About the Book:

When Henrietta's twin brother was killed, she vowed to avenge his death. Four long and lonely years later, Henrietta is still on the hunt, killing any bandit she stumbles upon. Her revenge never quenched, she seeks out the master pupeteer behind them all. Over the years, the Crimson Band quieted, with only tiny breadcrumbs left for her to follow. The monsters of old resurface from the underground, and Henrietta suspects the bandits at fault. Finally reaching the end of the trail, she faces the people she spent years looking for. But things are not as they seem. Henrietta's world turns upside down, her vengeance upturned as her plans change in finding the one truly responsible for her brother's death. On the way to find her revenge, Henrietta uncovers new truths, rediscovers herself, finds love she did not seek and helps prevent the rise of Mor, the God of chaos himself.

About the Author:

Maya Starling is a writer, a geek, an animal lover and a gamer. A native Croatian, she writes biographies of fictional characters, both short and long. Her four-legged, fury minions are rather useless because they always do as they please. She publishes most of her works for free on Wattpad under username Maya_2011. Her story, ‘The Red Menace’, is published on NOSF, a Croatian portal promoting SF&F. She hopes to one day find her novels on the shelves in the bookstores. In the meantime you can read them on Wattpad and follow her on or on twitter @MayaStarling.

Author's Note:

This is a first draft of a work in progress. I hope that the feedback I get here will help me with editing once I'm finished. Thank you all for your reviews!

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