About the Book:
After being unemployed for a while Zaida takes what seems like a seemingly easy job in a small library system to pay the bills. Within a short time she encounters a cast of characters that seem straight out of "Creep Show". An odd book shelver named Niles, a sexually ambiguous Children's Librarian and a intimidating security guard. Keeping everyone on their toes is Cora the Head Librarian who seems to be dispensing more than just books in her fortress of knowledge. Has Zaida gotten into more than she can handle?
About the Author:
Stay at home mom living in the Mid-West.
Need feedback on tone, character development, and story pacing. Does the story keep a reader interested or is it a yawner?
These are just the rough drafts of the first six chapters.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Point of View, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting, Continuity