About the Book:
Sean Valliant is a normal kid perfectly content remaining in the shadows of his much more gifted friends. His two best friends Jason Michaels, the all-American Quarter Back who happens to be a borderline genius, Tiffany King, an all-American in basketball who’s been by Sean’s side since they were babies. And his girlfriend Angelica Sinclair, an actress on a wildly popular TV Show whose film career crashed and burned before her 18th birthday. Sean perfect world is shattered by a seemingly random act of violence that drastically alters his destiny. Now Sean must figure out who, what and more importantly why before more lives are ruined.
About the Author:
I’m an avid gamer who been writing stories in notebooks for the last 20 years, I’ve finally decided to move them from the notebook and out into the word
So this is what I consider the pilot story of the series, and this is only the first part of a two part story. I intend for this to be an ongoing series much like a serialized TV Show. And like in most brand new shows, a 2-part pilot is required, please let me know what you guys think.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Pacing, Continuity