About the Book:
I wrote this story for english, so it ends quite quickly. Fortuinately I'm writing the version where they actually make it to the planet and all sorts of horrible things happen there. Anyway, hope you like this little bit of story.
About the Author:
Simply Antisocial is a soon to be college student, looking forward to getting a liberal arts degree. He is interested in music, reading, writing, and his dog.
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