The Final Jump

By Jennifer Alena

Draft 2 Posted Date: 5/16/2013

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Paranormal Romance

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About the Book:

“You shouldn’t be reading that book,” Josh said, his eyes dark and narrowed. “Don’t you know whose story that is?” Anne tried to refrain from jumping in surprise, startled as she was to see Josh standing at her feet. Doesn’t this guy ever get tired of sneaking up on me? she thought. He always seems to appear out of nowhere! She composed herself quickly and released the breath she had sharply inhaled a moment before. Anne placed the book in her lap and forced herself to look directly into Josh’s eyes. “No,” she said, hoping that she sounded calm though her heart thundered in her ears. When Josh made no further comment, she added, “Whose?” “Ours,” Josh said, his voice suddenly soft and husky.

About the Author:

Jennifer spends most of her time chasing after her five young children, but when she finds a spare moment she likes to read, write, knit, and solve puzzles.

Author's Note:

This manuscript has different sections that are in other fonts--hopefully it isn't too confusing when you read it on the Book Reader without those distinguishing fonts that separate parts of the story!

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