About the Book:
The world has been distorted into a battleground littered with walking corpses and wandering ghosts. The 'Daemon', or vampires, now dominate the humans, and are merciless to say the least. In a living hell, death is the best thing that could possibly happen to you. However, that's not an option in one young woman's fate, but as hopeless as her situation appears, she's not going down without a fight.
About the Author:
Solana Night (her preferred pen name) is a young writer who has lived in many places across the States. Besides writing, she also enjoys acting, art, and music.
I added an extra space between paragraphs simply because I can't stand how the format on Book Country pushes paragraphs together. Especially with dialogue. So, I went to the liberty of adding extra spaces. I hope you'll forgive me. On another note, Catastrophe is the first in my series, Cautionary Tales. Each story is completely unrelated, but hold one central theme revolving around consequences of certain actions. For example, with Catastrophe, the theme is, "The price you pay for heroism." I write these books simply because I think there are far too many happy endings. Pessimistic, I know.
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Overall Feedback, Voice, Dialogue