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Maria felt a sharp pain in her back, and realised she had been knocked to the ground. She peered through her long black hair as it hung down in the mud.
In a second the man had torn at her clothes, and his eyes leered at her exposed breast. Paralysed with shock, she could do nothing as the rough stranger stared down at her with his black eyes. She shut her mind to the ordeal, and could only turn her head away to the corral. Through moist eyes she could see the two other men rough-roping their strange bundle. They had tethered a long rope to one of the saddle-horns, and mounted their horses.
"Come on - come on! I ain't got all day," boomed the big voice again. "Where is he?" The stranger continued to glare down at her. "If you don't loosen your tongue I shall let the boys have their way, and believe me they ain’t so gentle!"
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I would like to thank the encouragement of those for taking the time to read and pass comments on my efforts.
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