By Vince Salamone

Draft 4 Posted Date: 10/10/2012

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About the Book:

The year is 225 AT. The world has seen much change. Massive walled city-structures called Hexagons replace metropolises of old. Military police keep the "peace" through violence and intimidation. Populations have reached breaking points, millions upon billions of people crammed into Sectors. Resources are stretched thin. Resistance is growing. This is the world Cyan knows. She is a cypher, a living hard-drive long outlawed by the hyperpowers. Protected for years by hacker Xander Callahan, she has never left his sight, happy and content in their Tokyo apartment. Until the day Xander disappeared. Now, hunted by police and haunted by disturbing visions, Cyan takes to the streets to find Xander and reclaim her life. And as her mystery unfolds , Cyan discovers that she may hold the key to saving more than just herself.

About the Author:

Vince Salamone is a writer/illustrator whose main interests are sci-fi, fantasy, and military. He has designed shirts, logos, and DVD covers.

Author's Note:

You'll notice that I have two versions of Chapter 10. I wasn't sure what direction I wanted to take with the chapter, so I thought why not put them both up and hear what you guys have to say! I'm looking forward to everyone's feedback! Have a great day, and happy writing! --Vincent

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