By Adelaide Emerson

Draft 1 Posted Date: 4/10/2012

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Based on 8 Reviews

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High / Epic Fantasy

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About the Book:

It all began with an energy flux and a pilfered vile, but as their journey progresses, Therin and his companions fall deep into the demented plot of an unknown, twisted force. Unable to gain the help they need, they set out on their own to find and stop a dangerous enemy from bringing down the world around them. But the enemy isn’t always obvious and sometimes, where one adversary falls another darker power rises.

About the Author:

Typically an over serious - but really very silly - online, offline, inline and out-of-line jotter. Refreshingly common, with just the right amount of swagger.

Author's Note:

This, like many fantasy novels, is a very involved story with alternate worlds and histories, but my hope is that it is fun to read, rather than a chore. It is important to note that there are, in fact, two distinct stories involving two groups of characters which later converge. Any and all feedback is welcome. Happy reading! Adelaide

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