The fattest Pigeon in Brooklyn

By Myriad Sprite

Draft 1 Posted Date: 2/2/2012

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About the Book:

So what happens when a God get antsy and start buggering about with the universe and all the creatures in it? Especially a God who has created him/her/itself out of nothing in an impossible fit of self-invention, completely against the laws of the universe. Laws that demand respect! Well, to keep these laws in order, and the Universe on track to it's final self-destruction the shadowy Meninblack have been employed to put things right, which usually means changing destinies, sometimes with lethal results. Brian Selton has settle down nicely in his new alien homeland of Umathra. But he is hardly prepared for the dangers to come. Both Umathra and Earth are now under threat from a new God and the evil prince Zugothru who have set in motion many terrible and rather disgusting events. Along the way there are many questions to be answered and disturbing and occasionally disgusting revelations to be made.

About the Author:

Myriad Sprite (No, not my real name) was born in London, England. Now lives in New Yoyuk with his Yankee Missus and their ball-catching schnoodle prodigy.

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I'd appreciate any feedback, especially as regards pacing.

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