By nfuschetti

Draft 2 Posted Date: 12/21/2011

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Traditional Fantasy

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About the Book:

Upon swimming in the ocean, Danielle stumbles across a set of handprints that transport her to another world. Once there, she discovers a land that lacks evil--at least it did lack evil before humans stumbled across the realm. Along with others who were transported to this world in various ways, these humans begin to recognize a connection to this world and they decide to remain in it, to save the world from the evil that is looming over the world, threatening to control and destroy it forever.

About the Author:

Nicole Fuschetti is a student at Stony Brook University. She is currently studying English and Philosophy. She lives on Long Island with her family.

Author's Note:

I am uploading a new chapter that I rewrote based on a review. I am going to continue to revise and upload new chapters as I go along.

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