By Timothy Maguire

Draft 1 Posted Date: 12/15/2011

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Contemporary Fantasy

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About the Book:

When the goddess Minaguti died, she gave mankind a gift for when her mistakes returned to haunt them. That gift is the only thing that will save them in the days ahead. For Gina, it will be the only thing that will protect her, but doing so will put her friends in danger. Only by being 'Unlocked' by her will they have the strength to fight.

About the Author:

Timothy Maguire is a young author of Science Fiction and Fantasy. An avid gamer, he often tries to create stories that are as unique as the worlds on his table.

Author's Note:

This is a short novella I wrote a while ago that I'll fully upload eventually. It's a mixture of darkness and humour. I'm mostly interested in using this as a learning exercise as I'm not sure how much the characterization works and whether or not the plot is coherent. WARNING: Rape forms a central part of the main character's backstory. If you think you might be offended, disturbed or otherwise discomforted, please don't read this. Upsetting people is the last thing I want to do.

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