My Four Girlfriends

By Timothy Maguire

Draft 1 Posted Date: 12/28/2011

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About the Book:

I thought that dating four girls would be the biggest problem in my life. Then a mysterious woman tore my life apart. Now me, Alyssa, Abbi, Petra, Mirri and Ron are at the center of a war that we don't understand. The girls are lucky, they've gotten superpowers out of the bargain. Me? I've got my wits and my mouth. It'll have to do.

About the Author:

Timothy Maguire is a young author of Science Fiction and Fantasy. An avid gamer, he often tries to create stories that are as unique as the worlds on his table.

Author's Note:

This is a demented idea that popped out of my head fully loaded a while back. It's an experiment in telling a story using multiple POVs as well as trying for an unconventional romance angle. I'm mostly interested in seeing if this can help me improve my characterization and POV skills, as well as telling a very different sort of story.

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