Slide The Scales From My Eyes | Book One of the Awakened Consensus

By Timothy Maguire

Draft 59 Posted Date: 9/30/2013

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About the Book:

So I was just trying to do my job when some weirdo cut through the bar wall with a laser, tied me up with ropes of light and kidnapped me. That was about the most normal part of my weekend. Since then, things have gotten weird. Turns out the whole kidnapping introduced me to the Shadow, the tangential dimension to our own where emotions are as physical as a blade and just as dangerous. Things live there, dark and terrible creatures with teeth made of hunger. The people who go there are worse. Gifted with strange, often bizarre abilities, they have their own agendas and uses for the Shadow. Unfortunately, I found myself at the centre of those agendas, hunted and courted by the different forces hiding the in the shadows. Finding my own path forced me to confront my own demons and led me to the unlikeliest of allies. Now, I just need to figure out how to use my own power before it drives me insane.

About the Author:

Timothy Maguire is a young author of Science Fiction and Fantasy. An avid gamer, he often tries to create stories that are as unique as the worlds on his table.

Author's Note:

I've recently published this through Book Country. I've left the first two chapters up for interested readers along with the reviews it received for interested parties to read. In other words, don't worry about reviewing it, as it'll be too late.

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