Ahii | Another story about a girl...

By Rosemaryjr

Draft 1 Posted Date: 11/19/2011

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About the Book:

Set in planet Daeon, the theme of color comes alive as each city dresses its people in their respective shades and hues of the rainbow all to show forced support for the heroes of then and the heroes of now. You can thank the OCD'd magistrate for that. Scared right? I would be too if I had to find out just exactly what needed to be done to end the world all while making sure to wear green and brown clothes, even down to the panties and bra. What great responsbility, sacrifice, choice behelds a girl just shy of 18 who only wishes to be a somebody, a celebrity, with nice fashions and cute boys to roam the streets of Persephone with. We've all been there, underestimating our talents, thinking celebrity would fix it all. Well, reality sinks in faster than expected. If only she had listened to her mom and not participated in the “become a hero” lottery.

About the Author:

My name is Rosemary Jasmine Rivera. I'm a 24 year old Hispanic, female writer with a BA in English concentration Creative Writing. I self published two books.

Author's Note:

This is a self published work available on Kindle, google books, and amazon. http://www.amazon.com/Ahii-Another-story-about-girl/dp/1453730443 If you like my work please support me by pledging in my fundraisers. http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ahii/coma-join-the-mystery http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ahii/because-im-a-nobody-my-first-two-years-on-my-own?ref=recently_launched

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