Eden 2.0

By Jay Phillips

Draft 1 Posted Date: 11/2/2011

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About the Book:

A girl escapes into a world that is scorched, sick and living beyond its natural years. A boy knows there is something more. Together they will find it.

About the Author:

Jay Phillips works in the publishing industry and has been writing for the last year.

Author's Note:

Thanks in advance for taking the time to read and for any feedback you might provide. Whilst writing I had in my mind a young adult audience and it would be great to know if you think they make an appropriate target.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Character Development, Pacing

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