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Orphans of Talos
By
Timothy Maguire
Draft 8 Posted Date: 4/24/2012
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Genre:
Traditional Fantasy
Word Count:
122,166
About the Book:
Alex and Luce aren't exactly Earth's best representatives. Luce is a near obsessive science nerd with a few missing social graces. Alex is a wiseass nerd with a world class annoying streak. Unfortunately, they're the ones who end up on another world. Now, they've got to find a way home, a route that leads through a paramilitary police unit full of impossible magic and into the monster that brought them to Talos.
About the Author:
Timothy Maguire is a young author of Science Fiction and Fantasy. An avid gamer, he often tries to create stories that are as unique as the worlds on his table.
Author's Note:
This is my largest story so far and most of it's still in the process of being edited (yes, it's even worse that what I've uploaded). I need to do a lot of work on it still, but I'm hoping readers might find a few errors I need to work on. The general story's your traditional lost on another world story, but I like to think I've subverted a lot of the traditions with two characters who seem to exist to complicate the story.
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Draft 8 4/24/2012 (1) Reviews
Draft 5 2/25/2012 (1) Reviews
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