By KristenH

Draft 4 Posted Date: 2/8/2012

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Environmental Thriller

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About the Book:

Twelve years ago, Kylie Marx was bitten by a snakebite, left for dead by a poacher, after she eyewitnessed his crime. Now, she's a herpetologist who studied snakes and finding new ways to prevent snake bite prevention and anti-venom procurement. At a symposium in Key West, things turn awry, when he's back with a vengeance, stalking her and others there, while killing poisonous animal for nefarious reasons. Now, it's up to Kylie to figure out why, and how to beat the clock, before he kills other with his hybrid snake.

About the Author:

I'm an unemployed inspiring writer. I'll be 35 in May. A former NJ girl, I've been a resident of Ohio for 11 years.

Author's Note:

I apologize for the formatting of my new revised chapters. I don't know how to fix it, when I uploaded it. I've recently gotten a Revise and Resubmit from an agent who had read my full--her concerns were head hopping, scene set-up, direction of purpose of the scene isn't clear, and too many secondary characters that didn't contribute anything unique to the story. (I believe the last concern was directed for latter chapter.) I believe I've fixed it. But if you see any of these concerns for your reviews, please point them out to me. If you don't, let me know too.

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