Neon Tiger

By amberh

Draft 5 Posted Date: 7/13/2011

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Noir / Hard-Boiled

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About the Book:

Josephine Gray is a thief, a damned good vault expert who's been in the business for over a decade. When she's asked to fly out to Las Vegas by one of her close friends to pull a job, she gets a bad feeling about the job that she just can't shake. It doesn't help that one of the crew members seems to have a crush on her, and another wants to kick her ass because of it. When the job becomes compromised, the crew wants to throw in the towel, but the people that hired them don't think that this is an option.

About the Author:

Amber is a coder by day, writer by night. She began by writing on the walls in her grandparents house, and now calls Google Docs her sanctuary.

Author's Note:

NEW DRAFT: 7/6/11 - I've removed the first section of Chapter One after the recommendations. I've tweaked the other chapters as well.

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