About the Book:
Caranome and Tia, wife and mistress, once rivals, now sisters in sorrow, meet in the laboratory of Herculo Chiavengo where Dickson, his rabbity cyber-technician, has prepared MAKER, a Mass Anologic, Kinetic Esthetic Replicator to create Chiavengo's greatest work of art. .
About the Author:
Military pilot, dancer, teacher. Flew and danced in Europe, taught in USA, Switzerland, Russia, China. Now traveling, via writing, through inner space.
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Overall Feedback, Character Development, Dialogue