Buried Secrets--A Short Story

By KristenH

Draft 3 Posted Date: 8/1/2011

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General Mystery

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About the Book:

When Julie discovers a metal box buried in her garden, she finds out the truth on her missing long-lost twin sister, Catherine, who was abducted at age five. With their psychic connection, she believes she's alive, and a connection to missing children in the past. Once Julie discovers Cathy's alive, they're reunited, but have a long road ahead of them. Thanks to everyone who critiqued the new draft, months ago. Sorry, I didn't turn it into a novella. But I did add description and a better ending. Enjoy!

About the Author:

I'm an unemployed inspiring writer. I'll be 35 in May. A former NJ girl, I've been a resident of Ohio for 11 years.

Author's Note:

This is a brand new short story I wrote and edited a new version this spring/summer. Let me know what you think. It's a general mystery and a quick read. Enjoy!

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