About the Book:
A bridge in between civilization and waste, suspended above a dying sea. A boy who becomes King.
About the Author:
Lilah Black is an aspiring author and poet. She has an interest in all things art and music. She hopes to share her words with like-minded people over the globe, promoting self-awareness of a global communication. You can find her at www.dstilledthoughts.wordpress.com
I would especially love detailed feedback on the pace, mood, and setting.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Plot, Pacing, Continuity