The Terrible Mr. Thompson

By Jennifer Boller

Draft 4 Posted Date: 6/9/2016

Book Rating (current version):

Based on 2 Reviews

Book Rating (all versions):

Based on 6 Reviews

Genre:

Middle Grade

Word Count:

8,592

About the Book:

Kieran is a sixth-grade boy who simply wants to do well in school and attract the attention of a pretty girl in his class. However, a villainous – and hilariously incompetent – substitute teacher, Mr. Thompson, stymies his efforts at every turn.

About the Author:

Jennifer Boller lives with her husband and her two children, both of whom are avid middle-grade readers, outside of Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania.

Author's Note:

This book is approximately 27,000 words. I've included only the first 6 chapters here.

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