About the Book:
Imaginations are just that: imaginations. Or are they? Pepper Fairfield is a spunky young woman with an incredible imagination. When she accepts a job as a nanny at Calthorpe Manor, she finds that she has let herself in for a lot more than she expected. With mysterious disappearing doors, magical colour-changing bunnies and a couple of sassy sylphs, this house is nothing like what she’d anticipated. Is it haunted? Or is it something even more? In a whirlwind of events, Pepper finds herself fighting against impossible odds, not only for her life, but for the safety of humankind. What this land needs is a hero, but how do you convince a hero who’s sure he’s anything but? If one thing is for certain, it’s that, in an existent world of non-existence, anything can happen . . .
About the Author:
Rachel E. Wollaston is a young writer living in Gloucester, UK, with her mother and sister. Besides writing, she also likes dancing, painting, and has a love for cats.
These are the first two chapters of my novel in progress. I do have more, but have decided to upload them slowly. Hope you enjoy it so far, and I'm looking for any and all feedback. Hold nothing back!
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