About the Book:
This book covers the journey of a teenage girl when she discovers that the company she works for is actually a malevolent corporation that "tests" on the supernatural race of shape shifters infesting London. After a rescue mission gone wrong, the lead role Mae finds herself on the run from the company with a charming young man named Cody. After hiding out in multiple safe zones, building a trustful relationship with Cody, and having several brushes with death, it seems all has settled down, save for a few mental scars caused by the enemy and the ally. But has the dust settled, really?
About the Author:
There's not really much to say about me, just that I'm obsessed with writing. I have countless notebooks piled up in the corners of my room that have nothing written in them. Though sometimes I'll come across one, flick through it, and find short story galore hiding between the pages. You see, sometimes, late at night, an idea will pop into my head, just a sentence maybe, or even just a word, but nevertheless I have to write it down. I pick up the nearest pen and notebook, and I scribble furiously, I write down what I need to say, then leave it for my future self to find. These are only short stories that I rarely ever expand on, but once in a while, I will continue on from my notebook, and 'The Fight of a Lifetime' is what comes out of it. Also, I am only 16 years old, I'm still in school, and I'm not sure I'm prepared for a full on profession in writing. However, I am studying English Literature in college and I pass my time at home writing. It's become a huge hobby of mine and when I heard about this site I thought 'why the heck not? I'll post my work and see what other people think. If they don't like it, I'll keep it to myself. If they like it, maybe I'll give writing a go and try and get something published. I might as well try.' ... So here I am.
This is just a prototype, I guess, it's not immaculate and there are some errors. Also, I'm pretty sure there's a massive loophole somewhere. I'm more of a 'wing it and hope something good happens; kinda girl, rather than a 'plan it down to a T' kinda girl. I've tried t fix any plot holes I've come across, but you never know I guess. Also, the ending may be a little rushed, I will fix that soon enough but for now I just want this posted and i would like people to tell me what they think, I was given an offer by a publisher a while back, told me to email him if i had anything good to publish. That's why I'm here. I would like you to read this, and tell me if you think this book is worth sending to a publisher. THANK YOU.
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