Akata | A Prequel to 'Callous'

By Sabrina Jade Howard

Draft 2 Posted Date: 2/29/2016

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About the Book:

ACCEPTING DEATH --- His eyes were dead when he looked at me. He knew what I had done. I saw him unsheath his blade, and I was certain he would never forgive me. The cold metal gleamed in the mottled light filtering down through the thick canopy. For a moment, I saw the flash of blood that had stained the blade in the past. I shivered. All those lives, snatched away like pearls. No mercy. And now, seeing his cold, blue eyes gleaming with rage, I knew I was next... --- A Prequel to Callous

About the Author:

I am an artist and writer, with many comic and novel projects in the works. I write mostly fantasy, but I've dabbled in other genres. I love historical fiction, and I've never shied away from a good romance. Genre mixing is a particular hobby of mine. I am a college student, studying Linguistics and Fine Arts as a double-major. I love learning about history, language, and culture. If you are interested in checking out my artwork, visit www.cronasonlyfriend.deviantart.com

Author's Note:

This is a mostly unedited draft, so expect there to be a few typos. That being said, I would love feedback on pretty much everything else. :) Although this is a fantasy novel, I have actually done a lot of research to make things a lot more believable.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting, Continuity

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