By Lisa Adiele

Draft 3 Posted Date: 7/29/2015

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"This is my life mom, and I'm going to finally start living it." Eighteen year old Jesse Daniels life has been planned out from the minute she was born. She was okay with it at first, but college is where she drew the line. She was ready to find her own identity and enjoy her college years. After gaining her new sense of freedom, she meets big man on campus Derek Stone. Derek was charming, confident, mysterious and kind. He was everything a girl could want in a man, but Jesse would soon learn that she should never judge a book by it's cover.

About the Author:

Lisa Adiele is an aspiring New Adult author from New Jersey. When she's not busy creating drama filled stories, she's busy reading Psychology books and working on earning her Bachelor's Degree

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This book is a work in progress

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