A Lifetime in Aries | Possible opening chapter

By Joseph G. Rogers

Draft 1 Posted Date: 3/9/2015

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This is a small portion of my book, and maybe the first 8,000 words, I am not sure. Looking for feedback and critique. Your really not supposed to know anything on what is going on, I just want to know if it sounds cool. Thanks in advance for humoring me.

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Lives in Albany NY just waiting tables and bidding my time.

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Please be honest.

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