About the Book:
Heather had everything. She had Derick, the house, and plans for a perfect wedding. But when she found a love letter tucked away in the attic, both Derick and Heather found more than they bargained for. Can Derick, his coven, and demonologist friend save Heather on sacred ground? Or will she have to manifest her powers from within to save herself from the demon haunting her?
About the Author:
Amanda Kimberley has been writing for three decades and is a no non-sense non-fiction writer named Kimberley Linstruth-Beckom by day, who focuses mostly on the health condition known as fibromyalgia, due to her own diagnosis in late 2005.
By night, she dons her bathrobe and enjoys typing out paranormal romances at her white marble desk. She likes to nibble on chocolate and potato chips while drawing out her characters with music from her iPhone in the background.
This is an early draft so I'm only concerned with characters and plot right now. Please focus on that with the story, particularly flow. I'm wondering if it is too slow in the beginning.
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting, Continuity