The Body Shop

By Jen Lewman

Draft 2 Posted Date: 3/5/2015

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Genre:

Psychological Thriller

Word Count:

5,174

About the Book:

While recovering in a hospital after an accident, Mark wonders how he got there, and where everyone else is.

About the Author:

I am a Registered Nurse in PA. I have always loved writing, and last year I won an essay contest in which the prize was a free trip to Ireland, in exchange for my blogging about my trip. Ever since I returned from my trip I have been making my writing a priority, and I am excited to see where it takes me.

Author's Note:

These are the first two chapters of my novel "The Body Shop". It is still a work in progress. I am currently at 10,000 words and my goal is to reach 50,000. I am posting the beginning of my book to see if I am headed in the right direction with this story.

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