About the Book:
While recovering in a hospital after an accident, Mark wonders how he got there, and where everyone else is.
About the Author:
I am a Registered Nurse in PA. I have always loved writing, and last year I won an essay contest in which the prize was a free trip to Ireland, in exchange for my blogging about my trip. Ever since I returned from my trip I have been making my writing a priority, and I am excited to see where it takes me.
These are the first two chapters of my novel "The Body Shop". It is still a work in progress. I am currently at 10,000 words and my goal is to reach 50,000. I am posting the beginning of my book to see if I am headed in the right direction with this story.
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Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting, Continuity