Crocodile Pete

By Sheila Craan

Draft 8 Posted Date: 12/23/2014

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Genre:

Middle Grade

Word Count:

547

About the Book:

Crocodile Pete is found drifting around in a schoolyard aimlessly. He follows Jeffrey home, and in school and eventually does all his homework. Jeffrey is mesmerized and believes the crocodile is a figment of his imagination. He aces his summer school work, thanks to the crocodile, except, he doesn't want his father to ever find out. He knows his Dad will penalize him for cheating and taking short cuts.

About the Author:

I love writing children's stories and already have approximately ten to twelve illustrated pictures for Crocodile Pete. I'm trying to fit a story to the pictures, a most difficult thing to do, however, this is my challenge.

Author's Note:

I have an idea for a plot and am working on it. This manuscript is a work in progress! Desperate help is needed. I'm not sure what the climax should be.

Requested feedback Criteria: Overall Feedback, Point of View, Voice, Character Development, Plot, Dialogue, Pacing, Setting, Continuity

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