About the Book:
Lola Winters’ heart already belongs to Johnny, but for him, she’d sell the devil her soul. Unfortunately, the devil wants something else.
Beau Olivier is the kind of wealthy that buys anything—even people. When he makes Lola a proposition, she finds herself tempted into a seduction that will have her walking the line between comfort and humiliation, desire and resistance. He would own her—for one night. She would be his—for a price. It was wrong. It was scandalous. It was the opportunity of a lifetime.
Sex, music, neon on the Sunset Strip—right in the middle of it all, he would have her. Come sunrise, he would let her go. At least, that was the plan.
About the Author:
I'm a contemporary/erotic romance author who tends toward the forbidden. My first series is a romance centered around an affair, and it's on Amazon & other retailers (partially on BookCountry too!).
This is the beginning of book 1 in an erotic romance serial called Night Fever. Warning: contains adult, taboo themes. I'm mostly looking for feedback on pacing & narrative, especially on Chapter 1. Specific notes on Chapter 1 would be very helpful! I'm curious whether or not the reader is drawn in, and why or why not. Thank you!
© Jessica Hawkins 2014
Requested feedback Criteria:
Overall Feedback, Point of View, Character Development, Plot, Pacing, Continuity