About the Book:
With the discovery of the alternate dimension Nirvana, and the clean and efficient energy source found on it called mana, Earth can enjoy pollutant free world with no wars fought over fuel sources. However, Utopia is the only company with the means of extracting this energy source. They do this by enlisting mages. To be anything you want and do everything you can dream of is the company motto, and mages can do just that. In Nirvana, mages can live out their ultimate gaming fantasy. They can be swordsman wearing medieval armor or be gunslingers using futuristic power armor.
Enticed by these words, Kujo decides to work for Utopia as a mage. He's surprised at how easily he is accepted and is even more surprised when he sees Nirvana for the first time. But surprises aren't all good. After barely surviving his first quest, he soon realizes Nirvana isn't a fantasy world at all, but a killing field for mages. To make matters worse, he forced to join the most notorious guild in existence, the Magic Appreciation Society.
About the Author:
Virage graduated from Purdue University with a Bachelors of Arts in Creative Writing. He has written several novels, including The GAT Club, Seraphim Crusade, Avence Chronicles, and Stardust Paradise. But before you give him too much credit, he's never published anything in his life, ever. Not even get a poem in the school newspaper. But he does like to write. He is currently living with his cat, Boots, and takes pictures of her when she sleeps in front of his monitor.
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