A Carnie Tale

By BoJo Johnson

Draft 3 Posted Date: 6/16/2014

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About the Book:

When a Carnival takes on a new job in the town of Drain they have no idea what they're in for. The coins the locals use put the Carnies under a spell, but what's worse is the Carnies disappearing. Not just them, but also everything that belongs to them, while in their place are strange black lines have made a design. Only a few Carnies have avoided the coins spell, but are they enough to defeat the evil in the town?

About the Author:

Married, with 4 kids (2 boys, 2 girls), writing since 12, keeping my stories since I was 15, and constantly working on a variety of stories.

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This is a Christian Horror story.

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