Do You Ever Cry in Your Car?

By Avery Johnson

Draft 2 Posted Date: 11/27/2013

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About the Book:

Do you ever just cry in your car? Amy does. When she's diagnosed with cancer, when she has to find a ride to the hospital, when her coworkers bring meals to her door, when the nurse accesses her port. She cries in the car, in the doctors office, in the hospital when the doctors put a tube down her throat, she cries.

About the Author:

Avery's a nurse based in Nashville, TN. This is her first attempt at writing anything longer than a research paper, so we'll see how it goes.

Author's Note:

Hey team, this is my first attempt at writing a book, and I have no idea what I'm doing. Any criticism is helpful, this was done without any outlining or planning so I don't expect greatness.

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