By Darrell Pestana

Draft 5 Posted Date: 9/4/2013

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About the Book:

Johnny is a teenage boy with a problem, and a somewhat unique solution.

About the Author:

Darrell currently lives in Upstate NY, where he loves spending time with his two grown Children and enjoys writing, artwork, and opera, among other hobbies. "There are more things in heaven and Earth, than are dreamed of in your philosophy"

Author's Note:

an idea I got from a diminutive guest who shared my work space once upon a time.

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